Friday, November 25, 2016

The Accident Writing (Not Real)

The Accident Writing (Not Real)


Hey everyone! To day we did writing and we got to go on any doc or slide to edit it. Here is out learning outcome: We are learning to edit out work.
Anything in purple is new or edited.





My reflection is to do as much as I can straight away, I  will read my work out loud so I can here any mastakes and get feedback.

Blog Of The Day!
Here is this posts blog of the day!
Amelia!!!
Jorja!!!

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Hannah, Amelia here!
    Wow this is such a good story and I bet you had so much fun writing it because for my one I did.
    It is such a honour to be the Blog Of The Day! I can't wait until you do a new post. (Later today) Not giving any hints or anything.
    Did you have fun making this slide and writing the story? Do you have an idea for next post Blog Of The Day?
    Blog ya later!

    ReplyDelete

Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.